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		<title>Fashion Sense for Writers</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Aug 2010 14:59:17 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[For reasons that I’ll make clear in a future post, I recently finished reading a book published in 1904. It wasn’t the first story I’d read from the early 20th century, so I wasn’t surprised at how many writing “rules” the author &#8230; <a href="http://www.sarahettritch.com/fashion-sense-for-writers/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For reasons that I’ll make clear in a future post, I recently finished reading a book published in 1904. It wasn’t the first story I’d read from the early 20th century, so I wasn’t surprised at how many writing “rules” the author broke.</p>
<p>I come across a lot of sites and blog posts that talk about writing rules as if they were on the tablets Moses brought down from the mountain. I’m talking about rules like:</p>
<ul>
<li>Avoid adverbs</li>
<li>Always use “said.” Any other dialogue tag is distracting</li>
<li>Don’t head hop</li>
<li>Don&#8217;t start consecutive paragraphs with the same word</li>
<li>Etc.</li>
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<p>But those rules don’t describe good writing. They describe what happens to be in fashion today. And frankly, if every writer followed them to the letter, we’d all sound the same and pretty bland. </p>
<p>Oops, I started that last sentence with a conjunction. Hack! Or maybe not. That particular rule seems to be going out of fashion. And that’s a good thing. Not that I break it much.</p>
<p>I’ve read plenty of stories that broke all the rules and yet resonated with me and left me wanting more. It’s the story. It’s the characters. It’s not adherence to the rules. I treat the rules as guidelines. I sometimes break them.</p>
<p>In 50 or 100 years, people might read books from the early 21st century and marvel at how many writing rules we broke. But that won’t stop them from enjoying our stories.</p>
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		<title>Fantasy Story: Next Step</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Jul 2010 18:55:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[It&#8217;s almost time to send the fantasy story to my editor, so I&#8217;m giving it one last look. I was pleased with the feedback from my beta reader. She enjoyed the story, and when I asked her if she thought I should &#8230; <a href="http://www.sarahettritch.com/fantasy-story-next-step/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s almost time to send the fantasy story to my editor, so I&#8217;m giving it one last look. I was pleased with the feedback from my beta reader. She enjoyed the story, and when I asked her if she thought I should publish it, she responded with an enthusiastic, &#8220;Yes, definitely!&#8221; She seemed to get the story and the characters, so that&#8217;s encouraging.</p>
<p>It will take my editor 4-6 weeks to edit the story, so I won&#8217;t know until sometime in September whether I&#8217;ll publish it. I&#8217;ve taken a leap of faith and chosen a cover designer, so that if I go ahead with publication, I&#8217;ll have the front cover when I announce the book.</p>
<p>If you read lesbian fiction and/or mysteries, you may be familiar with <a title="Patty Henderon's site" href="http://www.pattyghenderson.com/" target="_self">Patty Henderson</a>. Patty writes horror stories and the Brenda Strange mystery series. She&#8217;s also a cover designer. We&#8217;ll work on the front cover while the story is being edited.</p>
<p>Stay tuned!</p>
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		<title>Two Books, But No Reviews</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Jul 2010 14:55:59 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[What a week! In my corner of the world, we&#8217;ve been enduring a sweltering heat wave, though it&#8217;s pouring now, so perhaps we&#8217;ll finally get some relief from the humidity. I&#8217;ve read a couple of books, but will refrain from &#8230; <a href="http://www.sarahettritch.com/two-books-but-no-reviews/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What a week! In my corner of the world, we&#8217;ve been enduring a sweltering heat wave, though it&#8217;s pouring now, so perhaps we&#8217;ll finally get some relief from the humidity.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve read a couple of books, but will refrain from reviewing either. One was a lesbian fiction novel. I don&#8217;t review fiction for the following reasons:</p>
<ol>
<li>Beyond spelling and basic grammar, any review is subjective. The same could be said of non-fiction, but at least you can give some idea of the credibility of the author and the breadth and depth of the material.</li>
<li>I don&#8217;t throw stones when I&#8217;m inside a glass house.</li>
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<p>I also read <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/030016453X?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=saraettr-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=030016453X">Reason, Faith, and Revolution: Reflections on the God Debate</a> by Terry Eagleton. If there&#8217;s one thing I&#8217;ve learned from my many years of hanging around the net, it&#8217;s to never, ever discuss religion, so no review on that one, either.  <img src='http://www.sarahettritch.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   Check out the reviews on Amazon.</p>
<p>The next book I&#8217;ll tackle is <em>Elizabeth&#8217;s Women</em> by Tracy Borman. Yes, another book about Elizabeth I, but given her long reign, there&#8217;s a lot to say. The book isn&#8217;t out in North America yet. I bought my copy from the Book Depository.</p>
<p>Other than that, I&#8217;ve finished the first draft of the September Rymellan story, and my computer has almost finished reading the fantasy story to me. So progress on both fronts.</p>
<p>I hope you&#8217;re enjoying your summer and that you&#8217;re somewhere cooler than I am!</p>
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		<title>Another Take on Winging It</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Jun 2010 14:05:53 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A while back I posted about outlining vs. winging it. Here&#8217;s another article related to the topic: In praise of seat-of-the-pants storytelling. The author seems to be asserting that winging it results in better stories. I disagree. The quality of &#8230; <a href="http://www.sarahettritch.com/another-take-on-winging-it/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A while back I posted about <a title="Outlining vs. Winging it" href="http://www.sarahettritch.com/outlining-vs-winging-it/" target="_self">outlining vs. winging it</a>. Here&#8217;s another article related to the topic: <a title="Seat of the Pants Storytelling" href="http://io9.com/5558810/in-praise-of-seat+of+the+pants-storytelling" target="_self">In praise of seat-of-the-pants storytelling</a>. The author seems to be asserting that winging it results in better stories. I disagree. The quality of a story depends on the writer, not on the writing method. And, of course, quality is always subjective.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve noticed that some folks use the term &#8220;pantser&#8221; to describe those who wing it. I guess it&#8217;s derived from &#8220;seat of the pants.&#8221; For some reason, I always envision someone heavy-breathing into a phone when I read &#8220;pantser,&#8221; so I think I&#8217;ll stick with &#8220;winging it&#8221; and &#8220;organic writer.&#8221; <img src='http://www.sarahettritch.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Now the Fun Part: Editing!</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 28 May 2010 18:26:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yesterday I finished the first draft of the fantasy story. It came in at 93,631 words, so my revised goal of 93,000 words was pretty close to the actual word count. Normally I feel a sense of relief, and certainly a &#8230; <a href="http://www.sarahettritch.com/now-the-fun-part-editing/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yesterday I finished the first draft of the fantasy story. It came in at 93,631 words, so my revised goal of 93,000 words was pretty close to the actual word count.</p>
<p>Normally I feel a sense of relief, and certainly a sense of accomplishment, when I finish a first draft. But this time, I felt sad. I like the fantasy characters very much, so I&#8217;ll miss our daily time together. Editing the story won&#8217;t be the same. It&#8217;ll be akin to watching videos of people, rather than being with them.</p>
<p>I like the Rymellan characters too, but when I finish a Rymellan story, I know I&#8217;ll soon &#8220;see&#8221; the characters again. Not so with the fantasy characters, but we may meet again in the future. I tied up the fantasy story with a neat little bow, but I left myself a couple of hooks I can pick up later, should I decide to write another story with the same characters. I suspect I eventually will.</p>
<p>For the past several months, I&#8217;ve worked on the fantasy between 9 and 11 every morning. I felt at a loose end this morning when it sank in that I don&#8217;t have to do that anymore. I&#8217;ll start to edit the fantasy next week, but I don&#8217;t have to edit two hours a day to make my deadline. I won&#8217;t have any trouble filling the extra free time, though. By this time next week, I&#8217;ll be back to wishing there were more than 24 hours in a day!</p>
<p>I hope to take a few books off my &#8220;to read&#8221; pile, which has grown considerably. I&#8217;m currently working my way through <em>Oprah</em> by Kitty Kelley.</p>
<p>Enjoy your weekend.</p>
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